The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table and pie charts illustrate information about the
amount
of travellers to Change the quantifier
number
Ashdown
Museum
and the rank of comfort
of them with their journey during the Add an article
the comfort
year
before and the year
after it was refurbished. Overall
, Ashdown
Museum
was
attracted more Unnecessary verb
apply
visitors
after it was renewed. In addition
, the survey shows that the level of satisfaction improves positively by visitors
.
To begin
with the table, It is readily apparent that total
number of travellers, who come to Change the article
a total
the total
Ashdown
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the Ashdown
Museum
, increases
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increased
considerablely
by 18.000 Correct your spelling
considerably
people
after it was refurbished.
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the pie charts, it Change preposition
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points
out Correct subject-verb agreement
point
impressive
change Correct article usage
an impressive
of
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in
visitors
satisfaction during the two surveyed Fix the agreement mistake
visitor
period
. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
Initialy
, Correct your spelling
Initially
people
, who are very satisfied and satified
, Correct your spelling
satisfied
rise
sharply from 45% to 75%. Among these, the most remarkable increase is the Wrong verb form
rose
people
group, who are very satified
by 20% after the Correct your spelling
satisfied
Ashdown
Museum
was reconstructed. Moreover
, the rate of dissatifaction
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dissatisfaction
visitors
accounts the
biggest proportion in Change preposition
for the
year
before refurbishment at 40%, which decreases significantly to 15% in Add an article
the year
year
after refurbishment. Add an article
the year
a year
Last
but not least, the rate of people
, who are very dissatisfied, also
go
down from 10% to 5% in the same surveyed times. Meanwhile, Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
people
do not have response
at 5% in the two periods.Add an article
a response
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