The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different continents between 1930 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table represents the
percenatge
of Correct your spelling
percentage
literacy
rates
of people in different continents over a
period 1990 to 2000.
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the
Overall
, it is evident that males had the highest proportion of literacy
in world
, Add an article
the world
whereas
, Europe was the most literate continent through
the period of a decade.
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over
To begin
with, more than 85% of males were educated in world
, Add an article
the world
moreover
, around 80% of Add an article
the world
world
population was literate. Europe had Change noun form
world's
highest
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the highest
literacy
rates
which
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apply
accounted
for 98%Wrong verb form
accounting
,
and more than Remove the comma
apply
same
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the same
percenatge
of men and women were educated. America was the second literate continent with 93.6% Correct your spelling
percentage
of
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apply
literacy
rates
.
Furthermore
, Africa had the least
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lowest
rates
in
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of
literacy
with less than 70%, roughly half percentage of women were literate in this
continent. In Asia, around 80% of population
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the population
were
educated, meanwhile, more than 90% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
people's
of Change noun form
people
Ocenia
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Oceania
literate
, Add a missing verb
are literate
includes
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including
same
percentage of men and women.Change the article
the same
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