The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below shows the sightseer's arrival in various parts of the globe. It can be seen that North
America
has the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
, Use synonyms
while
South Linking Words
America
has the lowest Use synonyms
number
of tourists.
North Use synonyms
America
started with 70 Use synonyms
million
backpackers in the Use synonyms
year
1990 and increasingly went up to 10 Use synonyms
million
for the next 1 decade which gained up to 90 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
in the Use synonyms
year
2000. Use synonyms
However
, during the Linking Words
year
2005, it slightly experienced a decrease Use synonyms
of
travellers with almost 90 billion of Change preposition
in
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that
is almost 20 Correct pronoun usage
which
million
higher than its starting point. Use synonyms
Moreover
, among the five tourist destinations, North Linking Words
America
is followed by Central and Eastern Europe with a starting Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
of 30 Use synonyms
million
and it peaked in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
year
up to almost 90 Use synonyms
million
, which is almost three times higher than the starting Use synonyms
year
. It is Use synonyms
then
followed by South-East Asia with 20 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
visitors
and achieved its highest Use synonyms
number
in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
year
which is more than twice that of the starting Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Sub-Saharan Africa has almost the same starting point as South Linking Words
America
with almost 10 Use synonyms
million
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,
and experienced its highest Remove the comma
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number
during the Use synonyms
last
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year
with twice its starting Use synonyms
number
in the Use synonyms
year
1990.
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On the contrary
, South Linking Words
America
gained the lowest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
for the span of 15 years. It humbly starts with almost 10 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
of
day-trippers for the Change preposition
apply
year
1990 and shows an increasing Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
every 5 years. Use synonyms
Then
it obtained its highest Linking Words
number
of travellers in the Use synonyms
year
2005 with almost 20 Use synonyms
million
which is almost twice as its beginning Use synonyms
year
.Use synonyms
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