The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below shows the sightseer's arrival in various parts of the globe. It can be seen that North
America
has the highest number
of visitors
, while
South America
has the lowest number
of tourists.
North America
started with 70 million
backpackers in the year
1990 and increasingly went up to 10 million
for the next 1 decade which gained up to 90 million
visitors
in the year
2000. However
, during the year
2005, it slightly experienced a decrease of
travellers with almost 90 billion of Change preposition
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them
that
is almost 20 Correct pronoun usage
which
million
higher than its starting point. Moreover
, among the five tourist destinations, North America
is followed by Central and Eastern Europe with a starting number
of visitors
of 30 million
and it peaked in the last
year
up to almost 90 million
, which is almost three times higher than the starting year
. It is then
followed by South-East Asia with 20 million
visitors
and achieved its highest number
in the last
year
which is more than twice that of the starting year
. Lastly
, Sub-Saharan Africa has almost the same starting point as South America
with almost 10 million
travellers,
and experienced its highest Remove the comma
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number
during the last
year
with twice its starting number
in the year
1990.
On the contrary
, South America
gained the lowest number
of visitors
for the span of 15 years. It humbly starts with almost 10 million
of
day-trippers for the Change preposition
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year
1990 and shows an increasing number
of visitors
every 5 years. Then
it obtained its highest number
of travellers in the year
2005 with almost 20 million
which is almost twice as its beginning year
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