The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration below shows the sightseer's arrival in various parts of the globe. It can be seen that North
America
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has the highest
number
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of
visitors
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,
while
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South
America
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has the lowest
number
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of tourists. North
America
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started with 70
million
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backpackers in the
year
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1990 and increasingly went up to 10
million
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for the next 1 decade which gained up to 90
million
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visitors
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in the
year
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2000.
However
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, during the
year
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2005, it slightly experienced a decrease
of
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travellers with almost 90 billion of
it
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them
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that
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which
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is almost 20
million
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higher than its starting point.
Moreover
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, among the five tourist destinations, North
America
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is followed by Central and Eastern Europe with a starting
number
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of
visitors
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of 30
million
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and it peaked in the
last
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year
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up to almost 90
million
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, which is almost three times higher than the starting
year
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. It is
then
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followed by South-East Asia with 20
million
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visitors
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and achieved its highest
number
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in the
last
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year
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which is more than twice that of the starting
year
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.
Lastly
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, Sub-Saharan Africa has almost the same starting point as South
America
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with almost 10
million
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travellers
,
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and experienced its highest
number
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during the
last
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year
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with twice its starting
number
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in the
year
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1990.
On the contrary
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, South
America
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gained the lowest
number
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of
visitors
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for the span of 15 years. It humbly starts with almost 10
million
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of
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apply
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day-trippers for the
year
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1990 and shows an increasing
number
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of
visitors
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every 5 years.
Then
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it obtained its highest
number
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of travellers in the
year
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2005 with almost 20
million
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which is almost twice as its beginning
year
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, number, visitors, million, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 9 times.
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