With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. What are advantages and disavantages about this phenomenon?
Nowadays, online dating has become more popular
due to
the development of technology. Linking Words
This
essay discusses the benefits and drawbacks of utilizing applications to meet partners online.
There are two main benefits of finding lovers via social media. Linking Words
First,
the accessibility provided by the gadget can be the main advantage as it will assist them to meet easily, utilizing the screen that shows the video of their partners, without spending hours going outside. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
scheme can cut transportation costs since both spouses do not need to make appointments offline in a place. Linking Words
For example
, some Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
Indonesian
have to do long-distance relationships across the continents Fix the agreement mistake
Indonesians
becuase
they should pursue their educations in Europe. Using Correct your spelling
because
this
technology, they can communicate with their girlfriends or boyfriends through a video call to see their faces or by telephone to listen to their voices.
Linking Words
However
, there are Linking Words
also
drawbacks caused by Linking Words
this
trend. The thing that happens the most is fraud. Linking Words
By the
reason Change preposition
The
of
high accessibility, Change preposition
for
Add a missing verb
is the
the
Correct your spelling
that
fraudster
can have access to scam their victims through online dating more easily than offline . Another reason is for some people, it leads to a bad relationship called ghosting, where one of them tries to leave the other without explanation. It happens because of the block feature which people can stop their followers from opening their profiles. To illustrate, if someone has an online boyfriend, it is easier for them to leave since the girl does not have the exact information about where he lives to ask him about the clarity of their relationship.
In conclusion, online dating can give benefits because of the accessibility and the lower cost spending for meetings. Fix the agreement mistake
fraudsters
However
, it can lead the disadvantages as it can cause fraud and ghosting.Linking Words
Submitted by nabilaintansari8 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure to maintain a logical progression of ideas, perhaps by using more cohesive devices or transitional phrases.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to illustrate the points better.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction clearly presents the topic and the conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed.
complete response
The essay addresses both benefits and drawbacks of online dating, providing a balanced discussion.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?