The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the data about the people's migration intentions to a specific urban area over a period of 15 years.
Overall
, the purpose of travel for employment was predominant among all factors. The aim of education witnessed the sharpest rise, Linking Words
however
, the increase with the lowest speed is seen in the number of adventurers between the first and the Linking Words
last
years.
The employment goal showed an upward trend of about 25000 from 2000 to 2010, Linking Words
nevertheless
, it fell below 90000 by 2015. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the number of people intending to study grew significantly Linking Words
overall
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although
the growth rate was slow between 2005 and 2010.
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On the other hand
, those who went to the city for adventure and to see their loved ones followed a similar path moving around 11000 by 2005. Linking Words
Finally
, family and friend visitors outweighed adventurers twice as many since 2010.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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