Task one graph shows the number of weekly hospital admissions in five hospitals in a country in europ in 2004 to 2018
The graph illustrates the
number
of hospital admission
on Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
weekly
basis for five different Correct article usage
a weekly
hospitals
in one country in Europ
Correct your spelling
Europe
over
from the year 2004 to 2018.
It is notable that over the years four Change preposition
apply
hospitals
had an increase in hospital admissions
whereas
Oxaly hospital
experienced a significant decrease in the Capitalize word
Hospital
number
of admitted people.
In 2004, Oxley was the hospital with the highest number
of patients admission
with 250 Replace the word
admitted
person
per Change to a plural noun
people
week
and experienced a downward trend over the 14-year period and reached a low of 110 admonitions per week
. Fortsmith hospital
had around 180 Capitalize word
Hospital
admissions
in the year 2004 then
experienced some fluctuation between 2010 and 2014 before they (Time finished here) levlled
off at 200 Correct your spelling
levelled
admissions
per week
.
Adlin hospital
Capitalize word
Hospital
had120
Correct your spelling
had 120
admission
in 2004 Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
then
experienced a substantial increase in the number
of hospital admission
over 14 years, Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
then
soared to 250 admissions
in 2018. The hospital admission
in both Bradly and Sandton Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
hospitals
were 200 and 80 respectively admissions
per week
. Both hospitals
saw a gradual rise in the number
of admissions
until they ended at 270 and 160 admissions
in the year 2018.Submitted by ghadeersulami on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, admission, hospitals, admissions, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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