You had a problem with your next-door neighbor. You have not been able to speak to the neighbor about this. Write a letter to this neighbor.

Dear Mr.Johnson We have been living in one street since 1997 and in
this
period we had several
increadible
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incredible
brilliant moments
,
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like we went
to
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fishing together or cooked a barbeque.
However
,
unfortunately
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unfortunately,
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you have been
distrubing
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disturbing
us at
nights
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night
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for 2 weeks as your
son
is practising playing
in
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on
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a
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the
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piano.
Although
your
son
will participate in
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competition after 2 decades of days and he practises for
this
, I and my family cannot sleep very well. My daughter
study
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at high school and she is a leader in her class.
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,
the
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result of sleeping less,she cannot concentrate
to
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lessons.
Moreover
, my
son
Jack
also
goes to
musicion
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musician
music
courses and he learns
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a
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guitar.
In
contrast
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he does all
hometasks
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homework
at
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lunch or when he comes
to
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home.
Furhermore
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Furthermore
, I cannot give
a
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focus
to
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my tasks,which are given by my boss. When I
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to finish them,I lose my concentration
immediatly
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immediately
. As we are
neighbors
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neighbours
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,I hope you can understand me. If your
son
plays his piano not at night,I and my family will be
increadibly
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incredibly
happy. I believe that
this
misunderstanding cannot break our connections and I am
waiting
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your reply
latter
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. Yours
sinceraly
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sincerely
, Qodirov M.
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coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas and improve readability.
task achievement
Consider providing a more structured conclusion or follow-up request to show resolution.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and considerate tone throughout, which is suitable for a neighborly dispute.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear introduction and some well-organized points about the disturbance and its effect.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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