You had a problem with your next-door neighbor. You have not been able to speak to the neighbor about this. Write a letter to this neighbor.
Dear Mr.Johnson
We have been living in one street since 1997 and in
this
period we had several Linking Words
increadible
brilliant momentsCorrect your spelling
incredible
,
like we went Remove the comma
apply
to
fishing together or cooked a barbeque. Change preposition
apply
However
, Linking Words
unfortunately
you have been Add a comma
unfortunately,
distrubing
us at Correct your spelling
disturbing
nights
for 2 weeks as your Fix the agreement mistake
night
son
is practising playing Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
a
piano.
Correct article usage
the
Although
your Linking Words
son
will participate in Use synonyms
big
competition after 2 decades of days and he practises for Correct article usage
a big
this
, I and my family cannot sleep very well. My daughter Linking Words
study
at high school and she is a leader in her class. Change the verb form
studies
Linking Words
While
, Change preposition
As
the
result of sleeping less,she cannot concentrate Correct article usage
a
to
lessons. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, my Linking Words
son
Jack Use synonyms
also
goes to Linking Words
musicion
courses and he learns Correct your spelling
musician
music
playing in
Wrong verb form
to play
a
guitar.Correct article usage
the
In
Linking Words
contrast
he does all Add a comma
contrast,
hometasks
at Correct your spelling
homework
the
lunch or when he comes Correct article usage
apply
to
home.Change preposition
apply
Furhermore
, I cannot give Correct your spelling
Furthermore
a
focus Correct article usage
apply
to
my tasks,which are given by my boss. When I Change preposition
on
seat
to finish them,I lose my concentration Verb problem
sit
immediatly
.
As we are Correct your spelling
immediately
neighbors
,I hope you can understand me. If your Change the spelling
neighbours
son
plays his piano not at night,I and my family will be Use synonyms
increadibly
happy. I believe that Correct your spelling
incredibly
this
misunderstanding cannot break our connections and I am Linking Words
waiting
your reply Add the preposition
waiting for
latter
.
Yours Correct your spelling
letter
sinceraly
,
Qodirov M.Correct your spelling
sincerely
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coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas and improve readability.
task achievement
Consider providing a more structured conclusion or follow-up request to show resolution.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and considerate tone throughout, which is suitable for a neighborly dispute.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear introduction and some well-organized points about the disturbance and its effect.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,