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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The given table shows the information about
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number
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 of people living in each other's territory from five different European countries: the UK, Germany, Italy, Poland, and Spain, in 2011.
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, it can be clearly observed that the
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 of German
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peoples
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people
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 living abroad
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 the greatest,
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 that of Polish
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 the fewest.
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, it is interesting to note that
Poland
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populations
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population
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 had the highest
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 of European citizens among all other nations
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 with, a closer look at the table
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 that at nearly 1.2
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million
 people, the total
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 of four European populations living in Poland was the highest of all compared regions, followed by the United Kingdom at roughly 1 million
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peoples
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 and Spain at 861,000
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peoples
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. Surprisingly, only
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 Polish moved out from their hometown at 6,000
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peoples
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people
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,
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 that of
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Italians
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were
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 almost fourfolded at 196,000
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peoples
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. With regards to the total overseas populations in each individual
countries
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country
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, it can be noticeable that
Polland
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 had the highest figures at 1.1 million
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peoples
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 which was roughly five times larger
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of in
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 Spain.
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, Italy marked
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its second place with 863,670
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peoples
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people
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 which was about 300,000 more than the remaining two nations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, peoples with synonyms.
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