The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
The 4 pie charts represent the data of the resident’s
age
in 2000 and the prediction to 2950.
Overall
, the number of age
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aged
years
of
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in
Yemen
in 2050 made up the llargest
percentage Correct your spelling
largest
while
the old people over 60 years
of
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in
Yemen
in 2000 was the smallest data. Morover
, the data Correct your spelling
Moreover
also
showed up
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apply
the
children Correct your spelling
that
less
than 14 in Correct word choice
younger
two
countries Correct article usage
the two
are
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has
decreasing
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decreased
years
.
Initially
, 46.3% of the living age
from 15-59 of Yemen
people before it start
rising up to 57.3 in 2050. The percentage Wrong verb form
started
age
more than 60 in over 50 Replace the word
aged
years
, from 3.6% in 2000 and up tp
5.6 in 2050.
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to
hanf
, in 2000 46.3% of the Correct your spelling
hand
Yemen
population was 0-14 aged
, Verb problem
years old
it
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compare
to 24.1%. In Italy, by 2050, Wrong verb form
compared
this
percent
decline to 37% in Correct your spelling
percentage will
Yemen
and 11.5% in Italy.Submitted by k2englishcenter on
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