The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line graph presents data about
car
ownership in Britain between 1971 and 2007. Throughout the period one Use synonyms
car
ownership has Use synonyms
remainded
steady. As can be seen Correct your spelling
remained
the
graph the Change preposition
in the
people
who Correct quantifier usage
number of people
has
one Change the verb form
have
car
were about 45% Use synonyms
1971
-2007.
Change preposition
from 1971
Poeople
who Correct your spelling
People
has
not Verb problem
did
any
Correct determiner usage
a
car
were about 50% in 1971. Use synonyms
However
, it Linking Words
downwarded
to probably 23% in 2007.
Correct your spelling
decreased
Although
, in 1971, the two Linking Words
car
owner amount rate was around 8%, it Use synonyms
was
dramatically increased till 2007.
Amount of people who Unnecessary verb
apply
has
three or more Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Use synonyms
car
has risen probably from 2% to 7% during these years.Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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