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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem

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The habit of recycling
waste
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 materials,
such
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 as plastic bottles or
papers
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paper
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, is not common in a lot of
countries
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.
This
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 essay explains the causes of
this
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 issue and the possible solutions to encourage recycling in these
countries
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. One of the causes on why some
countries
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 do not practice recycling is because there is no
trash
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management
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 made by the local
goverment
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government
.
This
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 lack of
management
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 encourages the idea of throwing all
kind
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kinds
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 of
trash
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 in one bin where in fact, the
trash
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 needs to be
seperated
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separated
 between organic
or
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and
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unorganic
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inorganic
 to be able to
recycle
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be recycled
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it
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apply
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.
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, a vast majority of people tend to be ignorant when it comes to
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 materials as it does not have an immediate effect on them.
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, many Indonesians are careless when it comes to putting
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on
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in
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 the bin, let alone
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recycling
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.
As a result
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, recycling is a big task to conduct in many
countries
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 as it requires individual awareness. The best solution to
this
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 problem is
a
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proper regulation from the
goverment
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government
 regarding
waste
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management
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 where they provide proper
trash
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 bins in residences and public places, and
also
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 build a recycling factory to proceed all the
waste
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 that can be recycled. Japan is the prime example of a country with perfect
waste
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management
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 and
recycle
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recycling
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 where there is a schedule for picking up each type of
waste
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,
such
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 as food
waste
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, which
make
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 it easier to filter and recycle.
Therefore
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, a strict regulation made by the country's
official
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officials
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 is proven to encourage people to manage
wastes
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waste
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 and increase
the
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awareness
to recycle
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of recycling
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. In conclusion, the lack of
trash
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management
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 and ignorant individuals are the causes
on
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of
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 why recycling is hardly found in many
countries
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 and the
goverment
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government
 has to make
waste
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management
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regulation
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regulations
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 to solve
this
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 issue.

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task achievement
Include more specific examples and data that support your arguments. Examples like Japan's recycling might be further developed with specific statistics or a brief explanation of its success.
task achievement
Ensure that all ideas are fully developed. Some points could benefit from further elaboration, particularly regarding the consequences of inadequate waste management.
coherence cohesion
Maintain the logical structure throughout. Some sections could use clearer transitions to enhance flow and understanding between points.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, directly addressing the question.
coherence cohesion
Good logical structure with distinct sections addressing causes and solutions.
task achievement
Ideas are generally clear and comprehensive with an effective use of a real-world example (Japan).
Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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