U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
energy
consumption by different sources of fuel in US
over a Correct article usage
the US
period
from 1980 to 2030. The unit is measured in Quadrillion
.
Overall
, it is evident that,
Petrol and oil are the main sources to produce Remove the comma
apply
energy
, whereas
, a few units
of energy
produced
by Hydropower.
Add a missing verb
are produced
To begin
with, In 1980, 35 Quadrillion
units
were generated using Petrol and oil, and number
gradually Add an article
the number
increasing
till 2030, Wrong verb form
increase
more
than 45 Rephrase
when more
Quadrillion
of energy
will be produced by this
fuel. The
Correct article usage
A
similarly
trend was observed in the Change the adverb
similar
energy
produced by coal, starting from around 15 units
in
the Change preposition
at
begin
of the Replace the word
beginning
period
and, will end at 30 Quadrillion
. The energy
consumption by Natural Gas is not changing throught
the Correct your spelling
through
throughout
period
of 50 years.
Furthermore
, the same proportion of
was produced by Nuclear, Solar/wind and Hydropower in 1990, Change preposition
apply
that is
less than 5 Quadrillion
Units
. After few
decades a Correct article usage
a few
consider
amount of increment was observed in Replace the word
considerable
energy
generation by Nuclear energy
, meanwhile, Solar/wind and Hydropower remain
Wrong verb form
remained
same
Correct article usage
the same
through
the Change preposition
throughout
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, period, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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