U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
energy
consumption by different sources of fuel in
US
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the US
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over a
period
from 1980 to 2030. The unit is measured in
Quadrillion
.
Overall
, it is evident that
,
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apply
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Petrol and oil are the main sources to produce
energy
,
whereas
, a few
units
of
energy
produced
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are produced
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by Hydropower.
To begin
with, In 1980, 35
Quadrillion
units
were generated using Petrol and oil, and
number
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the number
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gradually
increasing
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increase
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till 2030,
more
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when more
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than 45
Quadrillion
of
energy
will be produced by
this
fuel.
The
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A
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similarly
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trend was observed in the
energy
produced by coal, starting from around 15
units
in
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at
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the
begin
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beginning
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of the
period
and, will end at 30
Quadrillion
. The
energy
consumption by Natural Gas is not changing
throught
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through
throughout
the
period
of 50 years.
Furthermore
, the same proportion
of
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apply
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was produced by Nuclear, Solar/wind and Hydropower in 1990,
that is
less than 5
Quadrillion
Units
. After
few
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a few
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decades a
consider
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considerable
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amount of increment was observed in
energy
generation by Nuclear
energy
, meanwhile, Solar/wind and Hydropower
remain
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remained
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same
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the same
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through
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throughout
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the
period
.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • fuel sources
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • renewable energy
  • hydroelectric
  • solar
  • wind
  • fossil fuels
  • upward trend
  • fluctuations
  • nuclear energy
  • steady increase
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • projections
  • reliant
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