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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of US
families
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according to
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 their annual income in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015. At first glance, the income distribution of a significant portion of US
families
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 fluctuated in the ranges of $25,000-$50,000 and over $100,000. In 2007, the number of
families
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 earning less than $25,000 and between $25,000-$50,000 was around 25
million
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.
This
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 figure showed a minor increase in 2011 but slightly decreased to approximately 28
million
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 by 2015.
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, the
families
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 earning between $50,000-$75,000 and $75,000-$100,000 remained relatively stable, with totals of around 21
million
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 and 15
million
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, respectively, over the period.
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, households earning more than $100,000 began with a number that was double that of the $75,000-$100,000 group. By 2015,
this
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 income group experienced a slight drop, followed by a significant increase, reaching 33
million
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families
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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