The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented graph illustrates the figures for foreigners who are spending their vacation on a specified Caribbean
Island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
tourists
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who came to the
island
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showed a dramatic increase in seven years.
Although
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, the highest
number
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of
visitors
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was the
visitors
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who preferred to spend more time on the
island
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.
To begin
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with, in 2010 the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on cruises was less than a quarter
million
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.
This
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number
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doubled in 2011.
However
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, it halved in 2012. From 2012 to 2017, the
number
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of
tourists
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on ships skyrocketed, and it became 2
million
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tourists
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.
Furthermore
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, from 2010 to 2017, the capacity of
tourists
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who stayed on the
island
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remained constant at three-quarters
million
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.
Additionally
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,
this
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number
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was twice after two years. Between 2013 and 2015, the amount of
visitors
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was constant. There was a fluctuation in the
last
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two years and the
number
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became 1.5
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, tourists, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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