The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.

The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The line chart depicts the average
Japanese
monthly income (Yen) between 1953 and 1983, and the cost of monochrome
as well as
colourful
televisions
within the same timeframe.
Overall
,
while
Japanese
revenue per month rose dramatically throughout the period, the price of black and white and modern
televisions
plunged significantly. To commence, by 1953,
Japanese
salaries were slightly below 20,000, before experiencing a steady increase in 1963 at approximately 20,000.
Moreover
, in 1973,
Japanese
income grew noticeably, accounting for nearly 28,000.
However
, in 1983, there was a rapid surge in
Japanese
remunerations, reaching more or less 70,000.
On the other hand
, regarding the price of
televisions
, by 1953 the price of black and white devices was 110,000,
whereas
in 1953 colourful
televisions
had not been found.
In contrast
, by 1963,
although
modern
televisions
cost an estimated 85,000, monochrome units’ prices reduced tremendously, falling to roughly 40,000.
Furthermore
, by 1973, the prices of traditional and modern
televisions
decreased remarkably, dipping close to 25,000 and 55,000 respectively.
Additionally
, in 1983, these two figures of television prices continued to decline, amounting to about 50,000 for colour
televisions
, and around 20,000 for traditional
televisions
.
Submitted by rasendrya.hafiz on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, televisions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: