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The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.

The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
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The line chart depicts the average
Japanese
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 monthly income (Yen) between 1953 and 1983, and the cost of monochrome
as well as
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 colourful
televisions
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 within the same timeframe.
Overall
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,
while
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Japanese
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 revenue per month rose dramatically throughout the period, the price of black and white and modern
televisions
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 plunged significantly. To commence, by 1953,
Japanese
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 salaries were slightly below 20,000, before experiencing a steady increase in 1963 at approximately 20,000.
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, in 1973,
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 income grew noticeably, accounting for nearly 28,000.
However
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, in 1983, there was a rapid surge in
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 remunerations, reaching more or less 70,000.
On the other hand
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, regarding the price of
televisions
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, by 1953 the price of black and white devices was 110,000,
whereas
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 in 1953 colourful
televisions
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 had not been found.
In contrast
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, by 1963,
although
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 modern
televisions
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 cost an estimated 85,000, monochrome units’ prices reduced tremendously, falling to roughly 40,000.
Furthermore
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, by 1973, the prices of traditional and modern
televisions
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 decreased remarkably, dipping close to 25,000 and 55,000 respectively.
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, in 1983, these two figures of television prices continued to decline, amounting to about 50,000 for colour
televisions
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, and around 20,000 for traditional
televisions
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.

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