The line graph below shows the percentage of Internet users by population in the USA, Canada and Mexico between 1990 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram depicts the information about users of
Internet
, through Correct article usage
the Internet
population
in three different countries. The timeline is between 1999 and 2009.
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, Mexico
and the USA
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Mexico
, nearly 5%. While
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Mexico
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the USA
rose
by two times, and reached approximately 10% and 40%, respectively. Change the verb form
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Canada
improved to 30%. In next
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Mexico
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2007, when growth was only 5%.
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Canada
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