The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The toolbar chart and bar charts illustrate the different locations and types of dance
classes
that are attended by many young people in specific towns in Australia.
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Overall
, almost half of the locations of Linking Words
classes
are situated at private Use synonyms
studios
, Use synonyms
while
the college-based Linking Words
studios
have the least Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
classes
. The ballets and tap dances are experiencedUse synonyms
a
large Change preposition
by a
number
of people older than 11, compared with modern Use synonyms
one
, which has more participants from the younger age group.
48% of the Correct pronoun usage
ones
classes
are at private Use synonyms
studios
, and the second large percentage of locations are at school halls, which represent around a quarter of all places. The community halls and other college-based Use synonyms
studios
come ahead at 18 and 10 Use synonyms
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
total
Add an article
the total
number
, respectively.
Use synonyms
while
modern dance is the only type that has more participants from the older age group. The Linking Words
number
of students was 300 under 11 and more than 500 for 11 to 16 years. The other type Use synonyms
have more
younger ballet has the most children at 650 students and the least teenagers at 300. The modern type Wrong verb form
has
achieve
almost the same Change the verb form
achieves
number
of students from the two age groups.Use synonyms
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