Some people believe that zoos are inhumane and should be closed down. Others argue that zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that some people believe that

zoos

are inhumane and should be

shutted

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down. It is

also

possible to say that others argue that

zoos

play an important role in wildlife conservation. In

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I will explain both views

as well as

my opinion will be expressed.

To begin

with, in our current era

zoos

are increasing day by day and it is not needed at all since it is locked the

animals

whit

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chains and prevent them

to move

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from moving

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freely and

do

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what their nature

seek

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them to do.

For example

, if anyone

visit

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any zoo he can see that most of the

animals

do

no

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not

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act as they are in their wildlife location, most of those

animals

are sleepy and you can see sadness in their eyes.

In addition

,

zoos

are very dangerous

place

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to visit, even if they try to secure it well. It is

also

possible to say that, many dangerous

animals

escaped from the

zoos

which are located

closely

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to human

beings

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homes. and

this

is really a

terribule

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terrible

thing. In terms of, how

zoos

are

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important

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role in wildlife conservation. Many countries

annouance

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annoyance

announced

announce

to their strategy

about

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for

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zoos

, and it will be helpful to increase the

number

of

the

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extinct

animals

.

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,

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the Saudi

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arabia

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government

start

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this

thing in 2015 when the Arabic tigers' numbers

are

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were

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decreasing and it is almost

can

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not be found,

there

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plan was in the next 10 years we want to have 15

of

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apply

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the

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Arabic

tiger

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tigers

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to

be sure

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ensure

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the

number

is

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return to the normal range. Nowadays

while

we are in 2024 they hit their target for

Arabic

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tigers'

number

.

In addition

, having

zoos

will give the people the chance to see

alot

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a lot

of

animals

safely.

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, one

the

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zoos

which is located in the UK has visitors more than 2 million in every year and

this

is a huge

number

comparing

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with other places to visit. In conclusion, there is no easy answer to

this

question. On balance,

however

, I tend to that

zoos

should

be exist

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for the reasons mentioned in

this

essay.