The graph provides information from a 2008 report on consumption of energy in the USA from 1980 to 2030
This
line graph depicts a comparison of the consumption of energy
in the USA. It is measured by numbers in quadrillion units
from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
, It can be clearly seen that there was an increasing trend for most types of energy
. However
, petrol and oil were the types with the greatest rise in the number of energy
using
. Wrong verb form
used
Whereas
, hydropower was the lowest over the years.
According to
the given data in the following graph petrol and oil started with
35 Change preposition
at
units
in 1980. It increased sharply to reach a peak of 50 units
in 2030. Whereas
, coal began with 16 units
approximately in 1980. It rose rapidly to end up with 30 units
in 2030. By contrast
, natural gas started with 20 units
and it is
barely changed through the years.
Verb problem
has
On the other hand
, nuclear, wind as well as
hydropower were nearly similar according to
energy
consumption. They started with less than 5 units
in 1980. While
in the following 3 years, they increased slightly in 1990 . Then
they remained steady to end up with 10 units
in 2030.Submitted by saroooniiq8 on
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