The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares
metals
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' average monthly
change
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in prices over a 12-month period.
Overall
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,
Nickel
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and
Copper
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witnessed a downward trend in their average monthly
change
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, with the former decreasing more substantially.
In contrast
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,
Zinc
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's average monthly
change
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grew over the given period. In January,
Nickel
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's price was 6% higher in comparison to the previous month,
while
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the figure for
Copper
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and
Zinc
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was 2% and 1% respectively. By May, both
Nickel
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and
Copper
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's
change
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declined to around 1% and remained stable for a month. Meanwhile, with a more subtle decline,
Zinc
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overtook the other two
metals
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at over 1%. A
further
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decrease was experienced in all
metals
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' average
change
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between April and June, with
Nickel
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bottoming down at the lowest point, at -3%. From June to July, the average monthly
change
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grew and
then
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remained unchanged for two months, with
Copper
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at 1%,
Zinc
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just under 0%, and
Nickel
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at -1%. From October onward, an increase was experienced in
metals
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' average
change
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.
Therefore
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, by the end of the period,
Zinc
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overtook others at 2%, followed by
Copper
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at just under 2% and
Nickel
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at the lowest point, at 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metals, change, nickel, copper, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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