The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given diagram illustrates information about habits of drinking and buying
coffee
and tea in five Australian cities in the
last
4
weeks
.
Overall
,
people
who went to a café to drink
coffee
or tea were the biggest group in all of these five cities in comparison with the other two categories,
instead
of
Adelaide
. The
percentage
of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
in Sydney was the highest with almost 48% and 42% in Melbourne. In Hobart
people
who went to café were approximately 38%,
however
; the smallest
percentage
in
this
category was Brisbane and
Adelaide
with less than 35%. The
people
who bought instant
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
were close to 55% in Hobart and 53% in Brisbane. In
Adelaide
a half and in Melbourne nearly 48% of
people
bought instant
coffee
and a quarter in Sydney. The
percentage
going to a
coffee
for drinking a
coffee
or tea in
last
4
weeks
was approximately 63% in Melbourne and Hobart which are the same.
Although
the figure for going to café in Sydney is higher than 60%, in Brisbane is 5% lower which is almost 55% and in
Adelaide
with 50% is the smallest
percentage
at 50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, weeks, people, adelaide, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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