The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The given diagram illustrates information about habits of drinking and buying
coffee
and tea in five Australian cities in the
last
4
weeks
.
Overall
,
people
who went to a café to drink
coffee
or tea were the biggest group in all of these five cities in comparison with the other two categories,
instead
of
Adelaide
. The
percentage
of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
in Sydney was the highest with almost 48% and 42% in Melbourne. In Hobart
people
who went to café were approximately 38%,
however
; the smallest
percentage
in
this
category was Brisbane and
Adelaide
with less than 35%. The
people
who bought instant
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
were close to 55% in Hobart and 53% in Brisbane. In
Adelaide
a half and in Melbourne nearly 48% of
people
bought instant
coffee
and a quarter in Sydney. The
percentage
going to a
coffee
for drinking a
coffee
or tea in
last
4
weeks
was approximately 63% in Melbourne and Hobart which are the same.
Although
the figure for going to café in Sydney is higher than 60%, in Brisbane is 5% lower which is almost 55% and in
Adelaide
with 50% is the smallest
percentage
at 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, weeks, people, adelaide, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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