The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied ‘very good’ about various aspects of their hospital experience.
The chart depicts the feedback of the
pateints
who were admitted Correct your spelling
patients
various
wards of Change preposition
to various
Hospital
.
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the Hospital
Overall
,Holly ward
was Capitalize word
Ward
top rated
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top-rated
while
Oak ward
was lagging behind it.Maple Capitalize word
Ward
ward
stood at third position most of the Capitalize word
Ward
time
except waiting
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for waiting
time
.
Firstly
,Maple ward
stayed at 1st Capitalize word
Ward
postion
for all the different parameters.Percentages for the Correct your spelling
position
hostpital
staff,Correct your spelling
hospital
quality
time
and quality
of care are comparable and the value is close to 90% while
waiting time
for this
section was 75% which relatively
lesser than other factors.Oak Add a missing verb
is relatively
ward
was second
most liked award by the patients and the Correct article usage
the second
resposes
for hospital staff,waiting Correct your spelling
responses
time
,Quality
treatment and quality
of aftercare are
68%,54%,80% and 70% respectively.Maple Wrong verb form
were
ward
has poor performance as compared to others.Capitalize word
Ward
However
,waiting
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the waiting
time
for this
was more
than Oak Correct word choice
longer
ward
.It was outperforming in the Capitalize word
Ward
quality
of treatment but still
value is less than Add a comma
still,
other
two.Correct article usage
the other
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