Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with thrir family. Others believe that thid is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that

children

should spend all of their leisure

time

with their family members to

strenghthen

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strengthen

their bonds and for better nurturing

whereas

others opine that

this

trend may

put

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detrimental

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a detrimental

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effect on the holistic development of

childrens

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children

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as it

increase

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their

dependancy

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dependency

dependence

on

parents

and make them more asociality. For me, a sense of freedom is prior than anything else which is possible if

parents

encourage their

children

to participate in extra-curricular activities. On the one hand, spending enough

time

at home helps to create a better understanding among

children

and their

parents

. In

this

way, their bonds not only become stronger but

also

create a sense of security and

belongings

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towards their

children

when they enjoy the accompany of their

parents

. Another is that, a family environment is a safe place for

children

where they can freely share their feelings and thoughts

infront

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in front

of their

parents

without

doing

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any hesitation. So,

this

type of environment is beneficial for better nurturing of their

children

and promoting

emotionally

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well-being as well.

On the other hand

, Majority of the individuals think that it may negatively

effect

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the development of

children

at

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all

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. It is commonly seen that spending excessive

time

with family might limit their social interactions which is essential for developing their interpersonal skills when they

engaged

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in any

acticity

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activity

with their friends.

Moreover

, the constant involvement of family members

make

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children

to

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become overdependent upon their

parents

to

take

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make

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even small decisions which will create

dilemma

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in their

mind

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minds

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to choose the right path in future. To reiterate, spending free

time

with loved ones is essential

fo

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for

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creating good

relation

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and the better development of

children

whereas

others have their own view because it may limit their social involvement when they

solely

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dependent on their

parents

. For me,

children

should be

independant

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independent

and free to choose where they want to spend their free

time

and

parents

should motivate their

children

to

involve

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in

variety

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a variety

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of activities to learn new things when they socially interact with different personalities.

Also

, it helps to increase their involvement and confidence

too

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.