The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the different sorts of waste disposal
of
between 1960 and 2011 in one country.
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Overall
, we can see there are significant changes between 1960 and 2011 in paper
and food and Other, the other types, and looking at the information, apply changes in the types of waste disposed of throurghout
the years witnessed many Correct your spelling
throughout
variation
in one country.
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variations
To begin
with, in 1960 the most waste of disposed
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disposed of
is
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the
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Paper
with 25% and both the
food and Other Correct article usage
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cames
after Correct your spelling
came
the
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paper
with 12%, apply perecentage
changed in 2011, the Correct your spelling
percentage
paper
decreased to 15% and Other decline
to 4%, Wrong verb form
declined
while
the
food increased to 21%, Correct article usage
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also
the Textiles decreased to 11% in 2011.
On the other hand
, the
Plastic witnessed Correct article usage
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increase
dramatically between 1960 and 2011, where in 1960 was 8% and in 2011 the number reached Correct article usage
an increase
to
18%.
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However
, there are some sorts that remain steady or slightly increase, such
as Glass with 5% and Green wastle
9%, and metal from 8% to 9% in 2011, same the wood with 4% in 1960 and 8% in 2011.Correct your spelling
waste
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