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The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the different sorts of waste disposal
of
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between 1960 and 2011 in one country.
Overall
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, we can see there are significant changes between 1960 and 2011 in
paper
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 and food and Other, the other types, and looking at the information, apply changes in the types of waste disposed of
throurghout
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throughout
 the years witnessed many
variation
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 in one country.
To begin
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 with, in 1960 the most waste of
disposed
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is
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the
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Paper
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 with 25% and both
the
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food and Other
cames
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came
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 after
the
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paper
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 with 12%, apply
perecentage
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percentage
 changed in 2011, the
paper
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 decreased to 15% and Other
decline
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 to 4%,
while
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food increased to 21%,
also
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 the Textiles decreased to 11% in 2011.
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,
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Plastic witnessed
increase
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 dramatically between 1960 and 2011, where in 1960 was 8% and in 2011 the number reached
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18%.
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, there are some sorts that remain steady or slightly increase,
such
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 as Glass with 5% and Green
wastle
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waste
 9%, and metal from 8% to 9% in 2011, same the wood with 4% in 1960 and 8% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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