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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph
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 the difference in wheat
exports
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 in three countries
Australia
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,
Canda
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Canada
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 and
European
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the European
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 Community between 1985 and 1990.
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, looking at the information we can see the fluctuations in
rate
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 in the three areas throughout the years,
Australia
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 and
European
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the European
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 Community were
opssite
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opposite
 each other, and the
rate
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 in
Canda
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Canada
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was
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fluctated
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fluctuated
.
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 with, in 1985 the
rate
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 was close approximately in the three countries,
Australia
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 had the lowest wheat
exports
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compeard
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compared
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 other,
the
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and the
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rate
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 downward trend until 1990 the
nuber
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number
 of
exports
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 in
Australia
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 reached
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12,
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contrast the European Community
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 in 1985 with 17 and the increased to above 21 in 1990.
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,
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 witnessed fluctuated between 1985 and 1990,
where in
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 1985
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with
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 18 and
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 in 1988 the
rate
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 rose significantly to 25, but the rise
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exports
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in exports
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it
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did not
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lnog
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long
, the number decreased to 14 in 1989 and
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sttle
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settle
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 in over 17 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, australia, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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