You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There is no denying the fact that
people
nowadays often struggle to manage their time
for hobbies
and activities, this
could impact the lifestyle of society
and them. This
essay will discuss why few individuals devote time
to engage in hobbies
and activities and the effect could have on their performance or in society
.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for incapable hobbies
to do for individuals.
Firstly
, many people
have difficulties arranging their time
and making it suitable for hobbies
and other activities. In other words
, they have difficulty making a clear plan that contains work
and other commitments so they avoid free time
for hobbies
. In addition
, life now is complicated so many people
believe they should work
a secondary job even if it is just part-time
. For example
, due to
economic issues, they spend their valuable time
on other work
, instead
of focusing on their interests which causes weakness and exhaustion.
In terms of impact on individuals and society
, hobbies
and other traits are crucial for It could creativity, and ignoring this
activity could impact your performance negatively. It is also
possible to say that hobbies
could enhance imagination widely and improve knowledge effectively. Moreover
, focusing on work
deeply could affect your passion and lead to a worthless result. For instance
, people
need time
for joy and hobbies
in order to become strong and motivated.
In conclusion, there are many reasons for people
to ignore hobbies
recently. It is also
true that these behaviours could cause numerous issues as personality or society
, so arranging a clear plan and schedule for your day probably assist you with this
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Try to elaborate more on each point to provide a more comprehensive response.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single main idea to enhance clarity.
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Focus on using more specific examples to support your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, guiding the reader through the text smoothly.
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You have maintained a formal tone throughout the essay, which is suitable for this type of writing task.
The Greeting
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Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.