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The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003.

The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003.
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The given graph illustrates the
frequency
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 of
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 residents
go
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 to the
gym
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 of 4 different age
groups
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 over the 20-year between 1990 and 2010. A glance at the graphs reveals that all ages tend to go to the
gym
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 more and more.
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, young
people
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 from 18 to 33
years
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 old tend to go to the
gym
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 much more than middle-aged
people
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 from 34 to 53
years
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 old. In terms of the
group
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 of young
people
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, starting from 1990,
people
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 aged 18-23 accounted for 15% and those aged 24-33 accounted for 17%. During the 8-year period, the
frequency
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 of exercising at the
gym
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 increased and
then
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 decreased in both age
groups
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.
Subsequently
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, the
frequency
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 of the youngest
group
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 increased sharply and peaked the hit in 2006 with 25%,
then
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 decreased to only 17% in 2010.
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 that age
group
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 24-33 increased steadily each year, by 2010 the
frequency
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 of
this
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group
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 up to 26%.
On the other hand
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,
groups
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 34-43
years
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 old and 44-53
years
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 old have much lower distribution rates, 5% and 7% respectively, and remained the same for the next 4
years
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. Afterwards, the
frequency
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 in the two
groups
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 increased slightly by 2% in each
group
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. In the final period, the number of the 34-43 year old
group
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 continued to increase and reached 10% by 2010.
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, the number of the oldest
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 continued to stabilize.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words frequency, gym, groups, people, years, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • trend
  • gym attendance
  • frequency
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • gender disparity
  • societal norms
  • lifestyle changes
  • fitness industry
  • patterns
  • economic factors
  • public health campaigns
  • technology advancements
  • accessibility
  • workout regimes
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