You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003.
The given graph illustrates the
frequency
of Europeans
residents Replace the word
European
go
to the Wrong verb form
going
gym
of 4 different age groups
over the 20-year between 1990 and 2010.
A glance at the graphs reveals that all ages tend to go to the gym
more and more. Additionally
, young people
from 18 to 33 years
old tend to go to the gym
much more than middle-aged people
from 34 to 53 years
old.
In terms of the group
of young people
, starting from 1990, people
aged 18-23 accounted for 15% and those aged 24-33 accounted for 17%. During the 8-year period, the frequency
of exercising at the gym
increased and then
decreased in both age groups
. Subsequently
, the frequency
of the youngest group
increased sharply and peaked the hit in 2006 with 25%, then
decreased to only 17% in 2010. Beside
that age Correct your spelling
Besides
group
24-33 increased steadily each year, by 2010 the frequency
of this
group
up to 26%.
On the other hand
, groups
34-43 years
old and 44-53 years
old have much lower distribution rates, 5% and 7% respectively, and remained the same for the next 4 years
. Afterwards, the frequency
in the two groups
increased slightly by 2% in each group
. In the final period, the number of the 34-43 year old group
continued to increase and reached 10% by 2010. On the contrary
, the number of the oldest group
continued to stabilize.Submitted by elsenglish16992 on
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