IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#maps #show #changes #art #gallery #ground #floor #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The diagrams illustrate information about the change
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
Use synonyms
art
Correct article usage
the art
show examples
Use synonyms
gallery
Change noun form
gallery's
show examples
 ground floor in 2015 and
present
Correct article usage
the present
show examples
day
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, the
entrance
Use synonyms
 and the right rooms remained stable. Meanwhile, there was a considerable change
with
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
 of
Use synonyms
art
Correct article usage
the art
show examples
gallery
Use synonyms
 and the left place in 2015 and
present
Correct article usage
the present
show examples
day
Use synonyms
.
Initially
Linking Words
, it is readily apparent that the
entrance
Use synonyms
 and
entrance
Use synonyms
 hall did not change after
Correct article usage
the transforming
show examples
transforming
Replace the word
transformation
show examples
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the right rooms, which were
exhibition
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
show examples
 1,2,3,
also
Linking Words
remanied
Correct your spelling
remained
 stable in the two periods.
By contrast
Linking Words
, the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
 of
Use synonyms
art
Correct article usage
the art
show examples
gallery
Use synonyms
 changed completely. The receptionist moved to a new position, which was far away from
Use synonyms
entrance
Add an article
the entrance
show examples
 than
previous
Change the article
the previous
show examples
 situation.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, a lift was constructed near
exhibition
Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
 3 in
present
Add an article
the present
show examples
day
Use synonyms
.
While
Linking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 the stairs were replaced to the left side.
Therefore
Linking Words
, the cafe
room
Use synonyms
, which was situated
the
Change preposition
in the
show examples
 left corner of
Use synonyms
art
Add an article
an art
the art
show examples
gallery
Use synonyms
 in 2005, was smaller and altered by the
gallery
Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
present
Add an article
the present
show examples
day
Use synonyms
. In
addtion
Correct your spelling
addition
, the
gallery
Use synonyms
 office was destroyed and a vending machine was set in front of the
gallery
Use synonyms
 shop.
Finally
Linking Words
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
exhibition
Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
 4 was divided into two rooms, which
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
show examples
 transformed into the
tempolary
Correct your spelling
temporary
exhibition
Use synonyms
 and children's area.
Submitted by duongntt.tld on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, day, entrance, exhibition, room with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: