The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The diagrams illustrate information about the change
of
Change preposition
in
art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
ground floor in 2015 and Change noun form
gallery's
present
Correct article usage
the present
day
. Overall
, the entrance
and the right rooms remained stable. Meanwhile, there was a considerable change with
the Change preposition
in
center
of Change the spelling
centre
art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
and the left place in 2015 and present
Correct article usage
the present
day
.
Initially
, it is readily apparent that the entrance
and entrance
hall did not change after Correct article usage
the transforming
transforming
. Replace the word
transformation
Moreover
, the right rooms, which were exhibition
room
1,2,3, Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
also
remanied
stable in the two periods.
Correct your spelling
remained
By contrast
, the center
of Change the spelling
centre
art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
changed completely. The receptionist moved to a new position, which was far away from entrance
than Add an article
the entrance
previous
situation. Change the article
the previous
Furthermore
, a lift was constructed near exhibition
room
3 in present
Add an article
the present
day
. While
,
the stairs were replaced to the left side. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
, the cafe room
, which was situated the
left corner of Change preposition
in the
art
Add an article
an art
the art
gallery
in 2005, was smaller and altered by the gallery
room
at
Change preposition
in
present
Add an article
the present
day
. In addtion
, the Correct your spelling
addition
gallery
office was destroyed and a vending machine was set in front of the gallery
shop.
Finally
, the
Correct article usage
apply
exhibition
room
4 was divided into two rooms, which was
transformed into the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tempolary
Correct your spelling
temporary
exhibition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, day, entrance, exhibition, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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