The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the data on the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five major
countries
in a five-year gap from 1999 and 2004. First of all, the furthest differences in coffee
sales
between these 2 years are in the UK, with a difference of 18.5
million
euros
. Followed by a decent
increase
in Switzerland from 3 to 6
million
euros
.
Thus
,
countries
like Denmark, Belgium and Sweden only indulge a small
increase
, ranging from 0.2-0.5
million
euros
.
On the other hand
, banana
sales
in these European
countries
varied differently, as some of the
sales
were unstable increased and decreased. As seen, Switzerland has the highest peak of differences as it differed by 32
million
euros
. Whilst, UK and Belgium had a slight
increase
ranging from 3.5 to 4.5
million
euros
.
Lastly
, Sweden and Denmark experience a drawback as it decreases about 50-80% of the original number.
To conclude
, the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
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variously,
while
European
countries
'
sales
of bananas experienced a fall.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, countries, million, euros, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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