The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of five different kinds of
books
sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
It is clear that
both Adult and children’s fiction had an upward trend,
while
Biography, Travel and Others had a downward trend. Regarding the statistics, Adult fiction
books
increased slightly from 20% to 25% in 1972 to 1992,and
then
increased dramatically to 45% in 2012.
In addition
, children's fiction
books
climbed by 5% from 1972 to 2012.
However
, Biography
books
showed a minimal
decreased
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from 20% to 15% in 1972 to 1992, and
then
it fell to 8% in 2012.
Moreover
, Travel
books
increased slowly by 3% from 1972 to 1992, and
then
it dropped to 10% in 2012.
Besides
, from 1972 to 1992,the Other
books
choice declined by 5% in 1992 ,
then
fell to 12% in 2012.
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