The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph compares to the figure for
visitors
who are spending their vacation on a defined Caribbean Island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,the total number
of tourists
who came to the island
showed a dramatic rise in seven years. Moreover
,the highest number
of visitors
was the tourists
who liked to spend more time on the island
.
As the graph shows,the number
of people on cruises in 2010 was 0.3 million
.This
number
doubled in 2011. Then
, it halved in 2012. From 2012 and 2017, the number
of visitors
on ships increased enormously and became 2 million
tourists
Besides
that , it appears from the graph from 2010 to 2017 the number
of vacationers who stayed on the island
remained constant at 0.8 million
tourists
. Besides
.Additionally
,this
number
was twice after two years.Between 2013 and 2015,the amount of visitors
was constant.There was an oscillation in the last
two years and the number
of tourists
who stayed on the island
became 1.5 million
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