The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017
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The line graph compares to the figure for
visitors
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who are spending their vacation on a defined Caribbean
Island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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,the total
number
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of
tourists
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who came to the
island
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showed a dramatic rise in seven years.
Moreover
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,the highest
number
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of
visitors
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was the
tourists
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who liked to spend more time on the
island
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. As the graph shows,the
number
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of people on cruises in 2010 was 0.3
million
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.
This
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number
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doubled in 2011.
Then
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, it halved in 2012. From 2012 and 2017, the
number
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of
visitors
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on ships increased enormously and became 2
million
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tourists
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Besides
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that , it appears from the graph from 2010 to 2017 the
number
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of vacationers who stayed on the
island
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remained constant at 0.8
million
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tourists
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.
Besides
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.
Additionally
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,
this
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number
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was twice after two years.Between 2013 and 2015,the amount of
visitors
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was constant.There was an oscillation in the
last
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two years and the
number
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of
tourists
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who stayed on the
island
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became 1.5
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, number, tourists, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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