The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph compares to the figure for
visitors
who are spending their vacation on a defined Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,the total
number
of
tourists
who came to the
island
showed a dramatic rise in seven years.
Moreover
,the highest
number
of
visitors
was the
tourists
who liked to spend more time on the
island
. As the graph shows,the
number
of people on cruises in 2010 was 0.3
million
.
This
number
doubled in 2011.
Then
, it halved in 2012. From 2012 and 2017, the
number
of
visitors
on ships increased enormously and became 2
million
tourists
Besides
that , it appears from the graph from 2010 to 2017 the
number
of vacationers who stayed on the
island
remained constant at 0.8
million
tourists
.
Besides
.
Additionally
,
this
number
was twice after two years.Between 2013 and 2015,the amount of
visitors
was constant.There was an oscillation in the
last
two years and the
number
of
tourists
who stayed on the
island
became 1.5
million
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, number, tourists, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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