The bar chart below show the sector contribution to india's gross domestic product from 1960-2000.

The bar chart below  show the sector contribution to india's gross domestic product  from 1960-2000.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product in three different categories (
agriculture
, industry, and
services
) over four decades, from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that
agriculture
's GDP contribution declined,
while
industry and
services
increased.
Moreover
, in the first 20 years,
agriculture
contributed the highest to India’s GDP, but in the final two decades,
services
became the highest contributor. In terms of
agriculture
, it started at more than 60% in the first year and
then
gradually dropped, reaching the lowest point at approximately 15% in the final year.
On the other hand
, in terms of industry, it increased slightly from about 15% at the beginning of the period to approximately 25% in 1980 and remained unchanged until the end of the period.
Similarly
,
services
rose significantly from more than 15% in 1960 to almost 65% in 200
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