Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities in a process known as urban migration. What are some of the reasons for this? What might be the future effects if this trend continues? You should write at least 250 words. You should spend around 40 minutes on this task. Your Task Two Answer:
Nowadays, many
people
have moved to cities
in order to get a better education or job opportunities, due to
variety
of chances there. Correct article usage
the variety
This
development benefits people
by giving them lots of options, as well enhance their education. However
, that can affect the balance in urban places and individual general health.
There are two main reasons encourage
Correct pronoun usage
that encourage
people
to move to urban area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
First,
in contrast
with rural, cities
offer a large range of schools with many different facilities and majors. For example
, if a person search
for medical or engineering universities, they will definitely find a few in the city, but not in the countryside. The second reason is Change the verb form
searches
the
Correct your spelling
that
cities
give people
many different job opportunities compared with rural areas, and that's mainly because the big companies and factories always choose cities
as place
for their main offices. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Therefore
, many people
think it's easy to get good
job with Change the article
a good
good
salary at their Correct article usage
a good
places
.
Fix the agreement mistake
place
As a result
of urbanization, many cities
now suffer of
traffic and noise, which affects them badly. Change preposition
from
Furthermore
, there are negative effects on the environment. According to
most leading health organizations, there is 10% pollution increasing each day in cities
due to
this
phenomenon. That increase
Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
Correct article usage
a person
person
footprint and Change noun form
person's
exacerbate
the effect of the green gases. Correct subject-verb agreement
exacerbates
This
traffic not only affects people
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
put
a lot of strain on the governments, because they need to enhance infrastructure by building new roads and houses to handle these numbers.
Wrong verb form
puts
To conclude
, although
urbanization has many negative effects on population and government, I personally think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages,
because it Remove the comma
apply
let
Wrong verb form
lets
people
explore their choices and get better
life. And development Add an article
a better
come
with its drawbacks.Change the verb form
comes
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task achievement
Try to further elaborate on some points to provide a more comprehensive overview, especially when discussing the impact on the government.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific idea to enhance clarity and structure.
task achievement
The essay addresses the question by discussing both reasons for urban migration and its future effects.
coherence cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion that effectively communicate the main argument.
coherence cohesion
Logical flow of ideas with adequate paragraph division.
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