There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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Map

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The map

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above is the representation of

the

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apply

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Paradise Island in past and its appearance

now a days

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nowadays

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Overall

beach

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the beach

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, cruise ship,Pier and Rocks remain

same

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the same

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over the year.

However

,scientific research and natural

spring

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springs

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are no longer present.A lot of things have been constructed over the years.

Firstly

Hotel

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a Hotel

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complex and swimming pool

has

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been built in place of

scientific

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the scientific

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research station.

Moreover

,there is an open restaurant and BBQ area

infront

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in front

of the Hotel.A significant

developments

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has been observed

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the place where there used to be

natural

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a natural

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spring,it has been replaced by the Cafe.

However

,there is a newly added cycle track all around the island for cyclists.

there

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is one more prominent addition in

new

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the new

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map

that

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is the

scienic

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scenic

lookout just beside the cafe.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

119 words

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