There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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Map

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The map

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above is the representation of

the

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apply

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Paradise Island in past and its appearance

now a days

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nowadays

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Overall

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beach

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the beach

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, cruise ship,Pier and Rocks remain

same

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the same

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over the year.

However

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,scientific research and natural

spring

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springs

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are no longer present.A lot of things have been constructed over the years.

Firstly

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Hotel

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a Hotel

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complex and swimming pool

has

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have

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been built in place of

scientific

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the scientific

a scientific

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research station.

Moreover

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,there is an open restaurant and BBQ area

infront

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in front

of the Hotel.A significant

developments

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development

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has been observed

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the place where there used to be

natural

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a natural

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spring,it has been replaced by the Cafe.

However

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,there is a newly added cycle track all around the island for cyclists.

there

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There

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is one more prominent addition in

new

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the new

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map

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that

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which

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is the

scienic

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scenic

lookout just beside the cafe.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

119 words

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can a lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Car owership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are n ow "one big traffic jam'

Do you think that ageing society will disapear? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people in society?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.