The bar charts show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates critical evidence about the hot desert climate in grasslands for various periods of time in the years 1980 and 2000.
This
unit is measured in precipitation.
Overall
, the graph clearly demonstrates that the
year
1980 had the majority of hot climate rain and it is up to 325mm. Unlike the
year
2000, its peak only reached 53mm.
According to
the data in the
year
1980, from January to February, the average rain was similar to these months at 255mm and 245mm; after that, it grew massively to reach its peak in March ( 325mm ).
Furthermore
, it kept falling down respectively till it became 150mm in July.
Moreover
, the rain grew moderately to 255mm in the
last
month of the
year
. In terms of the
year
1980,
this
year
saw an immense fluctuation, starting from January with 51mm decrease to 49mm in February; after that, it fell down to 47mm in continued for 2 months, respectively.
Moreover
, it grew significantly to 51mm for 2 months and grew again to 53 for 8 weeks. In September, it fell down and quickly grew back to the same position in November. In the
last
month, December, it fell again to 48mm.
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