Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of transport selections in the young generation in four particular countries.

Overall

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, it can be seen that

cars

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saw the highest points in all nations;

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bicycles

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witnessed the lowest rates, except for the USA. Looking at the details, figures for

cars

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in Great Britain were twice as high as

bicycles

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, at 60% and 30%, respectively.

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, motorcycles witnessed the lowest point (10%), making it the least well-known category on the list.

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, in the USA

cars

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(60%) were two times as popular as motorcycles (30%),

whereas

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bikes registered

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only one-tenth, making it the most unpopular percentage among

bicycles

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. Regarding the other nations,

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figures for motorcycles were at 15%,

cars

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and

bicycles

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saw similar points at about 43% in Germany. The final country is France, the percentage of

cars

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was at 75%,

whereas

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the former and latter ones saw the same points at 13%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, bicycles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

152 words

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Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.