Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of transport selections in the young generation in four particular countries.
Overall
, it can be seen that
cars
saw the highest points in all nations;
however
,
bicycles
witnessed the lowest rates, except for the USA. Looking at the details, figures for
cars
in Great Britain were twice as high as
bicycles
, at 60% and 30%, respectively.
While
, motorcycles witnessed the lowest point (10%), making it the least well-known category on the list.
Likewise
, in the USA
cars
(60%) were two times as popular as motorcycles (30%),
whereas
bikes registered
also
only one-tenth, making it the most unpopular percentage among
bicycles
. Regarding the other nations,
although
figures for motorcycles were at 15%,
cars
and
bicycles
saw similar points at about 43% in Germany. The final country is France, the percentage of
cars
was at 75%,
whereas
the former and latter ones saw the same points at 13%.
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