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The tаble and charts below give information оп the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in опе агеа of Britain. The tаble shows where the топеу сате from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information Ьу se/ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,.

The tаble and charts below give information оп the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in опе агеа of Britain. The tаble shows where the топеу сате from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information Ьу se/ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,.
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Given are two graphs
as touching
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showing
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 the police
budget
 in Britain.
Whereas
the
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they
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 disclose the sources of the force
budget
 in 2017 and 2018, the pie charts
picturize
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picture
 the loyalty to varied
margin
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margins
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. It is obvious from the information placed that
law
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the law
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budget
 came from three
foundation
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foundations
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, as long as 38m in 2017 and a bit higher 38.5m in 2018.Other sources like grants were the least engaged in providing
this
budget
 in both years.Meanwhile.Local Taxes had a mild role in succouring the police to increase the
budget
 and provided 912m in 2017 and 102.3m in 2018. National Government was the most
significant
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significantly
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responsibility
responsible
responsibile
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responsible
 for it with providing 174.5 in 2017 and achieving 177.8m in 2018
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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