Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverments to make It a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
In recent days ,with the outstanding industrial products ,
people
have become aware of a significant increase in the emissions produced from that mysteriously which people
are using daily . For example
; Plastic
and how it affects on
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apply
for instance
; lungs for a long period . However
, in this
essay , I would like to explain more about community's
role in fighting bad substances from distribution widely , Correct article usage
the community's
furthermore
, I would like to dig into more detail regarding this
matter .
To Commence with , Nowadays , it is a noticeable feature that people
have observed to utilize paper instead
of plastic
, specialty while
they are drinking coffee .Cited an
example , plenty of coffee shops worldwide cancelled using a Verb problem
An
plastic
straw and that initiated a new cup designed with a little prominent to pass any fluid through it and get a fantastic flavour . another important point that should mentioned is that , during shopping , after every single shop they review plastic
bags and at the end
the people
will collect a vast number of hazardous materials later on . So , some people
are caring about it and other
are not certainly .
Turning to the governments , there is most striking point is that raising regulations Fix the agreement mistake
others
that's
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that
claims
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claim
respect
the hazardous substances that have Fix the infinitive
to respect
are
come from Change the form of the verb
been
waste
by announcing the strict regulation and immediate implementation by people
. However
, for that issue , they are going to organize the water cans and Marie them with colours for easy identification , for example
, three different waste
can
yellow , red and green for paper Correct subject-verb agreement
cans
waste
, plastic
and general waste
, respectively, in addition
, educate the community starting with schools student and through temporary
campaign for the families and visitors to end up with educational society.
In conclusion , regarding that issue , Add an article
the temporary
a temporary
people
are divided end in two groups , one with it and the other against that. However
, I would like to enhance and support the government to the waste
such
as plastic
has to be recycled to avoid dangerous issues that might be happening in future .Submitted by dr.marwa on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph clearly addresses a specific aspect of the topic. Consider having clearer topic sentences and maintain focus within each paragraph.
Task Achievement
Clarify the purpose and contribution of the examples in your essay to improve comprehension.
Task Achievement
Demonstrate complex structures more accurately to better convey your arguments.
Task Achievement
The essay demonstrates awareness of the environmental impact of waste, specifically the use of plastic.
Coherence and Cohesion
A decent conclusion summarizes the key points and presents a personal judgement on the issue.
Introduction
The introduction sets the tone by addressing the importance of recycling and government laws.