The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in this year 2010.

The pie chart compares the percentage of

spendings

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spending

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in five different categories in Japan and Malaysia in the 2010 year.

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, the biggest amount of money in Japan was spent

in

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on

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other goods and services,

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in Malaysia it was spent

for

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on

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housing.

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with Japan, the smallest expenditure was for health care, 6%. The percentage of

spendings

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spending

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for

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on

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housing and

transporting

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transport

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were

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relatively similar, 20% and 21%. The percentage of consumption for food was higher, 24%. Meanwhile, Japanese people prefer

spent

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their money on other goods and services, which showed the biggest result, 29% Regarding Malaysia, the smallest result showed health care, which consisted

3

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%.

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little

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bit higher number showed the category of transport, 10%. The costs of other goods and services were almost the same, 26% and 27%. And for

housing

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housing,

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they spent the largest part of their incomes.