The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in this year 2010.
The pie chart compares the percentage of
spendings
in five different categories in Japan and Malaysia in the 2010 year.
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Overall
, the biggest amount of money in Japan was spent in
other goods and services, Change preposition
on
while
in Malaysia it was spent for
housing.
Change preposition
on
To begin
with Japan, the smallest expenditure was for health care, 6%. The percentage of spendings
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spending
for
housing and Change preposition
on
transporting
Replace the word
transport
were
relatively similar, 20% and 21%. The percentage of consumption for food was higher, 24%. Meanwhile, Japanese people prefer Correct subject-verb agreement
was
spent
their money on other goods and services, which showed the biggest result, 29%
Regarding Malaysia, the smallest result showed health care, which consistedChange the verb form
to spend
3
%. Change preposition
of 3
Then
little
bit higher number showed the category of transport, 10%. The costs of other goods and services were almost the same, 26% and 27%. And for Correct article usage
a little
housing
they spent the largest part of their incomes.Add a comma
housing,
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