The bar chart shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
The bar chart compares information about the number of
australians
who were employed in five types of occupations, segmented into sales, accounting, computing, nursing and farming in 2001 and 2008.
Looking from an Change the capitalization
Australians
overall
perspective, it is apparent that Correct your spelling
Australians
ausralians
more engaged in Add a verb
ausralians are
ausralians were
saling
in comparison with other jobs in both years. Correct your spelling
selling
Conversely
, the number of employed farmers in these two years were
remarkably small.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
To begin
with 2001, around 160000 Australians
prioritized saling
work Correct your spelling
selling
compare
with other types of jobs. Wrong verb form
compared
Although
sales was
the first option for them, accounting, in stark contrast, was the second choice. In terms of the least popular career, farming was considered Change the verb form
were
due to
its low number of people who were hired in this
job, around 20000.
Moving to 2008, there
is no secret that Correct pronoun usage
it
australians
followed the same trend just Change the capitalization
Australians
like
2001; Change preposition
in
hence
, the most popular job was sales, even its
popularity increased in Correct word choice
though its
compare
with 2001. Replace the word
comparison
Additionally
, australians
opted for computing, as a second Change the capitalization
Australians
favorite
option. The same as before, 2001, work related to agriculture, was the Change the spelling
favourite
last
option for them. Considerning
, Correct your spelling
Considering
australians
were Change the capitalization
Australians
recuited
even less than Correct your spelling
recruited
2001
.Change preposition
in 2001
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