In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What is the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part-time jobs?

Part-time jobs are being centre of attraction among youngsters in various nations. It is the same

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in my country too. India is a developing country and nowadays, there are many opportunities in every field to offer to

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where so much is on

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plate comes with a lot of pros and cons, which I am going to explain in upcoming paragraphs. When it comes to the benefits of working twenty

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per week, I think it is a good way to earn some money, so that children can

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their needs on their own,

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as their phone bills, college books and casual parties. Apart from these, they

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learn budgeting which can be useful later in life when they start earning at a big level.

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the latest survey, kids who start earning at

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be the best financial leaders and successful business owners.

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Mukesh Ambani is an Indian

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, who has been working from the time he was in school and gained so much experience from his jobs

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so that nobody can surpass him in the market. In

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of these benefits,

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believe

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generation needs to be motivated to do jobs during their college time. There is one disadvantage of

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phenomenon, which can not be neglected. The major downside is the unnecessary pressure they have to bear with the studies which can be harmful

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their mental health because not all

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the stress that comes

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problems in teenagers because

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is the time when they are

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dealing with hormonal changes in their bodies.

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studies done a long ago,

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proven that the age between

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to twenty is the most fragile and important years of life, a person can become the hero of his or her life or can be zero in the career. So.,

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think as long as

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the extra burden is

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there, it is beneficial and should be promoted. In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion that every coin has two sides, keeping in mind that children are not getting affected

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mentally or physically and they are able to balance both their studies and work together,

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without a second thought introduction of part-time employment should start as early as possible.