The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The chart below gives information on external tourists,who travelled

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various regions in a European country,namely the coast,the mountains and the lakes within 20 years period. Looking at an

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structure,it is readily apparent that,the indications of the coast prevail in the beginning and end of the period.

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,the mountains

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observed

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the fewest visitors,

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the lakes experienced inconsistent levels over the years. On the one hand,the coast was the most preferred area,that people visited in 1987 by 40.000,experienced a slight decrease to 35.000,

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increased steadily and peaked at 75.000 in 2007.As for the mountains,it was visited by 20.000 individuals in 1987,

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with moderate growth to 30.000 in 1997.The tokens remained stable until 2002,

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witnessed

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a minimal rise,reaching approximately 35.000. With regards to the

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one,the lakes,there

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dramatic

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rise,which went up from 10.000 in 1987 to 40.000 in 1997

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The number of overseas visitors reached

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peak level

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75.000.Till the ultimate period,it

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drop to 50.000.