Artisits need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artisits should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent di you agree or disagree

It is mentioned that liberty is a fundamental

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for

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artists

so they

could

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express their ideas.

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society

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that

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may be true, it is essential for us to have a better understanding

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point of view. To a certain degree,

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agree as total freedom enables the

artisits

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artists

to have better

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and explore the

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world.

On the other hand

, it might not be beneficial if the

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were not realistic and

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not comprehend what

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being asked

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them. To produce an exceptional

art

piece,

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artists

require their own time and space so they have some room

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thinking to develop the product, which can bring new light to the people.

For example

, La Sagrada Familia in Barcelona is still currently under construction process

due to

its complexity, yet people still consider it as one of the most beautiful

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in the world.

Furthermore

, by having an opportunity to explore the

art

scenery,

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artists

can showcase some of their masterpieces to the public. By expanding the horizon of

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world, society can grow in terms of innovative thinking,

this

innovative thinking

then

can be applied in many other aspects, technology

for example

.

On the other hand

,

artisits

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artists

need to be realistic as the resources that they have may not be able to create something that they have imagined. The artist may imagine

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a picture of

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, but when they

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the colour green, the image generated may not be the same as their initial perspective.

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,

this

profession usually

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sponsors to support them. it is unfortunate that on many occasions the

artisits

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artists

have

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point

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of view

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their clients, and if they do not get what they

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, these

artisits'

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artists'

business may not be sustained as their customers will use the service from another artist. To summarize, it is necessary for

artisits

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artists

to have their own freedom as it could bring out their creative and exploration sides. Meanwhile, we

also

have to remember that in order for the artist to create a remarkable product, we have to remind them

that

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is important for them to be realistic and comprehend what are the needs

from

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their clients.