“Prevention is better than the cure.” Researching and treating disease is too costly and so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extend do you agree?

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is modern society is too costly which is researching and treating. It has been said that the

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of people measures which is preventive,

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investment,

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is too costly. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that the number of measures which is better

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as healthy food, physical exercise, fasting, and so on. A

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highly medical

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is better than

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help

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our society.

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arguments for the idea that researching is more expansive than investment. Perhaps the main reason why people think research is expensive

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treatment

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possible it.

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not proper

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. In conclusion, researching and treating disease is a topic which is very relevant

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cure.