Obesity is becoming a major problem in many countries. What are the causes of this problem, and how can it be solved?

Obesity

is becoming a serious

problem

in many nations. It is a crucial challenge that must

have to

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solve

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for human beings. In my opinion, the diet of individuals on

daily

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basis and the lack of

exercise

are the main causes of

this

problem

. So, we will talk about the reason why the

obesity

rates are increasing and how can we overcome

this

problem

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this

essay. Recently, many

people

are getting

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obesity

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obese

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and

this

is a serious

problem

which can

occurs

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another diseases

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another disease

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,

such

as

a

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chronic diabetes and fatigue effect. There are

a

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plenty of

reason

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reasons

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for that. The

fist

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problem

is that

people

don't

care

about their diets.

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lives

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in a hectic world

,

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so

that

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they usually have

greasy

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and non-nutrient

fast-food

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fast food

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or frozen

meal

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which

is

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not good for their health.

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, someone has

sweet

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tooth, so they have been having a lot of sweets which

occur gaining

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weights

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,

in

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particular

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, in their childhood. The second

problem

is that they don't

exercise

. They need to take

care

of their body health,

however

, most

people

don't have

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time to go to the gym or

running

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outside when they

got

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off

at

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work.

For instance

, many news report the

problem

of the lack of

exercise

in modern society.

People

should not only take

care

of the food they have

,

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but

also

do the

exercise

in daily. They need to consume

the

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less junk food and frozen

meal

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meals

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and more healthy dishes and vegetables like salad, and homemade

meal

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meals

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which

concerns

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their bio.

Therefore

, they can consume well-structured nutrients through their meal.

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people

need to go to the gym or

running

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run

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at least 3 times

in

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a week.

Furthermore

,

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

governments

and companies should encourage

people

to

do

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the

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exercise

. In conclusion,

obesity

is causing a lot of

problem

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problems

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,

such

as

a

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chronic diabetes and fatigue effect. In

this

hectic modern society, they need to take

care

of their mental and physical health themselves.