Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. - Mention about the current sport facilities available - What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced - How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you to provide some new
sports
facilities for the young people of
this
area. I am Kuldeep Singh, a resident of Guru Hargobind Nagar, Phagwara. I am working in HDFC
bank
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in the NRI branch. Presently, there are not many
sports
facilities in
this
town. Children play
sports
like cricket and hockey
in
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the
ground
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of the Government High School. But, there is no facility for
sports
in
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the
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after office hours, where people of my age can play any sport. Sir, there is an open ground next to the school, which has become a dumping spot for people to throw garbage and other waste materials.
This
area is under the municipal corporation of the city.
This
place would be ideal for an indoor stadium for games like badminton and lawn tennis. It is my humble request to use
this
place for the stadium.
This
would benefit not only the young office goers
,
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but
also
the children and youth of
this
area.
Such
a place is much needed as we are leading sedentary lives, and some physical activity is imperative for all of us. Hoping for a careful consideration of
this
suggestion. Yours faithfully, Kuldeep Singh
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grammar
Ensure a balance in the usage of passive and active voice for variety and readability.
content
Consider expanding on the benefits of the new facilities, possibly with examples, to enhance the letter's persuasive impact.
greeting and closing
The letter opens and closes in a polite and formal manner, suitable for communication with local authorities.
logical structure
The letter clearly identifies a problem and proposes a feasible solution with supporting details.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, providing clarity and logical flow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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