Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although

some individuals assert that

cooporation

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cooperation

corporation

in

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world

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the world

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level

merly

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mainly

address

environtmental

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environmental

issues , It is

arguesd

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argued

that businesses take

advantages

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advantage

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of

this

mutual correlation . I hold the position that it could

also

benefits

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both developed

countries

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countries'

country's

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economy

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economies

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and local

business

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businesses

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to flourish. On the one hand , needless to

say

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that

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apply

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pressing

environmenatal

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environmental

issues ,including global warming,

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raised concerns

worldwid

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worldwide

. international aid could contribute to mitigating these challenges since developed

countries

may serve a significant role in funding developing and

underpriveledge

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underprivileged

nations where governments find it difficult to

dealing

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with

such

problem

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. to clarify my point in Iran ,

due to

inferior fuel and old cars which are

runing

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running

on petrol , air pollution

are

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exacerbating .

This

will

ultimatly

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ultimately

pose

risk

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to other areas even European

countries

.

Therefore

, other

countris

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countries

could help financially to lighten the burden on

Irnian

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Iranian

authorities , enabling them to alleviate

this

problem. On

other

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hand, the Impacts of international connection and globalization on promoting economic growth should not be denied .

This

could stimulate local

business

and provide low-income

countries

with more job opportunities .

For instance

in India , people and

antrepreneurs

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entrepreneurs

find

themselve

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themselves

struggle

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to land

in

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a job or run a

business

.

However

, recently small

business

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businesses

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are

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growing

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thanks

for

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to

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English

corporation

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corporations

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in

this

country.

thus

, both England and India

benefit

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as

Enlish

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English

also

promote

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their trade by finding a new market to sell more

produtions

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productions

production

.

To conclude

,

albeit

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many believe that international

cooporation

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cooperation

just

tackle

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tackles

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environmental challenges, it would be beneficial to enhance

economy

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the economy

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across the

glob

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globe

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and help new

start ups

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.