The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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is describing about

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industries and the

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of Brazil's economy

that

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apply

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consist

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of 5 industries to 45%. Each

industry

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has 3

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charts which are divided into 3 colours which are blue as 2009, orange as 2019, and grey as 2019. At

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in 2009, there was

finance

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industry

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, which got the highest

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with

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30% and

were

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followed by

tourism

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and

oil

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, coal, and

gas

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which had the same

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at 25%. Manufacturing had a

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different

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with

tourism

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and

oil

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, coal, and

gas

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which just 5% under.

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lowest

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in Brazil in 2009 was food processing which only

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10%.

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, in 2019, the

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charts are getting more stable than

2009

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in 2009

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as the difference is between 5% and 10%. The highest

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chart in 2019 was

also

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finance with 35% and

oil

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, coal, and

gas

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got the second place with 30%.

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tourism

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and food processing got the same

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as

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20% and

got

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followed by the lowest

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by

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only 15%.

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, in 2029, it

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predicted that

financial

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the financial

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industry

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get 40% and will decrease gradually in food processing and manufacturing

with

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10% and 5%. In conclusion, the financial

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is

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always increasing over the years by 5%.

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of

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apply

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that, manufacturing

get

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continuously

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decreases

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and the

oil

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, coal,

and

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gas

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and

tourism

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stay at the average 

percentage

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