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Punishment is the best approach to teach kids what is good and bad. Do you agree or disagree. What are the other options do teachers and parents need to follow, provide some examples

#punishment #approach #kids #options #teachers #parents
There are many types of
attitude
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attitudes
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 in how to educate
children
 for good
behaving
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behaviour
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, one of them is
punishment
.
Punishment
 often comes when the
children
are
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misbehave and do not follow the parents's instructions,
while
 it can be effective, I believe that
sometime
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better
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a better
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 approach can be taken.
Punishment
 is a negative reward, it
constitues
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constitutes
 a representation of the
unstatisfaction
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dissatisfaction
 of parents, its purpose is to lead the kids to think about their previous actions and to change
it
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them
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.
Punishment
 can be shown in different ways,
for example
,
to limit
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 the time using technology devices
such
 as
computer
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computers
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 or
smartphone
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smartphones
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, or
dont
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not
allow
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 them to hang out with friends.
However
, I think that there are better approach
for
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 doing the same thing, which is to alter their course of action when
children
 do bad things, and it is a positive reward,
for instance
, to
promise giving
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 them more time to play or
being
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 with friends, as long as they do better, and act nicely. I assert that taking something extra can lead the child to understand that he needs to work
for achieving
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to achieve
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 something.
To sum up
, there are two 2 ways to educate
children
 for good
behaving
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behaviour
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, and they are positive and negative rewards,
while
 both of them are effective, the first has more
merites
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merits
 like
signal
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a signal
the signal
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 to them that for getting stuff in life we need to do something in return.
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Incorporate more specific examples to illustrate your points, especially when discussing alternatives to punishment.
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Provide a more comprehensive analysis of both the advantages and disadvantages of using punishment versus positive incentives.
coherence cohesion
Enhance transitions between paragraphs to improve overall coherence and cohesion of the essay.
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The essay addresses the prompt by discussing both punishment and alternative approaches for teaching children.
coherence cohesion
An attempt is made to conclude the essay with a summary of the points discussed.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discipline
  • positive reinforcement
  • rewarding behavior
  • emulate
  • kindness
  • patience
  • respect
  • explanation
  • consequences
  • non-punitive strategy
  • time-outs
  • open communication
  • express feelings
  • emotions
  • impactful
  • generous
  • unacceptable behavior
  • calm down
  • alternative actions
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