Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantage to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Now some
people
prefer to live in a house
, and some believe that living in an apartment
is more convenient. In this
essay, I will look at the advantages and disadvantages of living in a house
and apartment
, decide what is more convenient for life
, and come to the conclusion why
some Change preposition
about why
people
think so.
The two main advantages of living in a house
, rather than in an apartment
, are a large personal area and peace of mind, the house
is located away from the noisy center
, the metropolis. Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, when you have more space to live, more
room for creativity, you feel more confident and comfortable. You are not under pressure from Correct word choice
and more
neighbors
and the walls of a small Change the spelling
neighbours
apartment
, you have a large personal territory that you can dispose of as your heart desires. Everyone dreams of a beautiful and big house
. If we recall Dostoevsky's novel “Crime and Punishment”, then
it was the oppressive atmosphere and narrow walls that influenced Rodion's consciousness. Secondly
, houses are being built in remote places, away from the bustling city
, away from noisy roads and streets. Houses are often built in separate rural settlements next to a forest or river. You can take a walk, listen to music late at night or
watch the sunset at any time, Correct word choice
apply
enjoy
the atmosphere.
Correct word choice
and enjoy
However
, living in a house
has a number of serious disadvantages, such
as high cost, not everyone can afford to live and maintain a house
, as well as
remoteness from the city
. Firstly
, housing and its maintenance are very expensive, not everyone can afford it. It will be more profitable for students or young people
to rent or buy an apartment
, it is cheaper. For example
, when students move to another city
, they rent an apartment
because they don't need a lot of space, and saving money comes first. Therefore
, studio apartments are now in demand among young people
, they are small and comfortable to live in. Secondly
, many people
prefer to live in apartments because it is convenient for social life
or work. Kindergartens, schools, offices, restaurants, bars and clubs, museums and theaters
- there are places to go. Change the spelling
theatres
For example
, it takes 2-3 hours to drive from a beautiful country mansion in traffic jams at 7 a.m. to work, or 30 minutes – an
1 hour if you live in an Correct article usage
apply
apartment
. You and your children always have somewhere to go with a boyfriend or friends.
In conclusion, it should be said that although
apartments are more comfortable in some segments, and living in a house
has certain disadvantages, I believe that a house
outside the city
is the best option for a comfortable family life
. I have lived in a forest village for most of my life
and I love nature very much. When I become rich and popular, my husband will earn $100,000 a minute, I will sit in my beautiful big house
, walk the dogs in the morning, feed the cats and ride horses in the field, I will wait for five children from school and think about which handbag to choose for lipstick. The apartment
is designed for young people
and work, and the house
is for quiet home comfort and relaxation.Submitted by khotkina.ma on
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Task Achievement
The essay provides relevant and specific examples to support the main points, particularly referencing Dostoevsky's novel and contemporary living situations.
Task Achievement
A comprehensive view is offered on both the advantages and disadvantages of living in a house and an apartment.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay has a well-structured introduction and conclusion, opening with the issue and closing with personal reflection and summarization.
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- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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